Dungeon Crawl BDSM Blog Hop

Dungeon Crawl Blog Hop bannerSo this is the first ever Dungeon Crawl BDSM Blog Hop from Romancing the Kink, and I’m really happy to take part. I thought I’d share a snippet from Coming, Ready or Not! Three Tales of Tease and Denial.

At this point in the story, Abby has been a very bad girl and her Dom, Will, is about to deal with it:

I have never known a day drag so slowly. I am finally on my way home from the gallery after a day of teasing texts that have kept me right on the edge.

Every time I managed to concentrate on something other than the belt between my legs and my desperate need to come, another text would arrive “Wouldn’t release feel good right now?”, “How’s your aching little clit?”, and the worst one by far “Don’t forget I’m going to cane that ass later.”

When I open the front door, I pause for a second and listen to see if you are home before me. The house is silent and I am thankful for a quiet moment to myself.

I pour a glass of water and then head for the lounge to do as you asked last night. I strip quickly, wanting the time to kneel and think about what I am going to say.

I find my thoughts straying to the promised caning and how much it will hurt and, as has been happening all day, to how much I need to come. I squirm a little on my knees, almost hoping I can find some way to make myself orgasm but it is no use.

I am not sure whether I am relieved or sorry when I finally hear your key in the door. I put my hands behind my back and look down at the floor, my stomach twisting in knots over what is about to happen.

I hear your footsteps enter the room and come closer. You sit opposite me in the chair near the fire, resting a cane across your lap.

“I’m glad you remembered. I’m here, Abby. Have you got something you want to say to me?”

For a long moment I am tongue-tied. There is so much I want to say and yet the words won’t come.

You shift in your seat, waiting, and suddenly, almost without me realising it, I begin to talk.

“Sir… Master, I’m sorry. I came without your permission and I’m so sorry. And it’s not because of the punishment or because I want to come or because you’re going to cane me. I’m sorry because I genuinely am, because I want to do my best for you. I want to please you and I know I didn’t do that the other day. I… please, Sir. Please will you cane me, please punish me.”

You are silent through all of this. I can feel your eyes on me but you give me no sign whether it is what you want to hear or not and let me stumble through it.

More silence. Perhaps I’ve not said what you wanted. My tongue seems to tumble all by itself to fill the silence.

“Please punish me, please cane me, Sir. I beg you.”

My face flames, not for the first time this week, in humiliation at having to beg.

The rest of what I say is incoherent but it seems to be enough. You lean forward and stroke my hair and my cheek.

“Very nice. Thank you. Now, head on the floor. Get that bottom in the air for me, Abby. And don’t forget to count the strokes.”

You stand and walk behind me, whipping the cane through the air as you go, and I tense at the sound.

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  • NormandieA

    Yikes! The cane. I love that she’s been a bad girl and how he teases/torments her throughout the day.

    • I know, the cane really hurts! Will is such a meanie with all that teasing, but I still wish he had a brother who was real :). Thanks for commenting, Normandie 🙂

  • Han van Meegeren

    Your snippit makes me want to reread your book again Liv! It’s such a wonderful intense book! Hmm, you choose the orgasm denial huh? It took us a long time, maybe more then 10 years or so to include it in our play. I Always thought the orgasms were a just reward for subbing to me… I think it is the most loving thing a wife can do: suppress her own pleasure to please the dominant.

    • Hello, Han :). Lovely to hear from you and thank you for the compliment. I think it must be very difficult to do. Delaying I can (sort of!) cope with but I think I’d struggle with denial. Fascinating to explore in my writing though, from both sides. Thank you for commenting 🙂

  • Maddie Taylor

    No! Don’t tense at the sound, or at anytime. It will only make it worse. But then it seems that Abby will enjoy that. OUCHIE! She’s a braver girl than I. Great snippet, Liv

    • Thanks, Maddie :). I know! I do that too. I can’t seem to help it. And you’re right; It does make it worse.

  • Casey McKay

    What a place to leave me hanging! I love that she can’t decide whether she”s relieved or sorry when he comes home!

    • LOL, sorry. I don’t think Abby’s keen on the waiting at this point either. Thank you for that comment. I like that bit too. I know exactly how she feels 🙂

  • Trent Evans

    Tease and denial = incredibly hot.

    Add the cane to that too? Dear Lord…

    Great clip, Liv. So glad you joined us this week!

    • Thank you so much, Trent :). Very glad I joined in 🙂

  • Renee Rose

    “I”m not sure whether I’m relieved or sorry…” YES! you so capture the anticipation!

    • Thank you, Renee :D. Anticipation can be the absolute best and the absolute worst of it, I think.

  • Sheri Savill

    Wow, that was … YES. Caning and ASKING for the caning. Works for me, Liv. 🙂 Thanks for crawling with us!

  • Whoa. I can taste the anticipation here. Well done!

  • Pheww, I finally got round the comments from last week! Sorry about that. I’m having a completely flat out busy March which shows no sign of slowing down but I’m really enjoying the hop and will try and get to as many blogs as I can.

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